Edit Request

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NOTE: I am proposing this edit for FleishmanHillard on behalf of GM Defense LLC. I am a paid editor and aware of the COI guidelines.

I am submitting this edit request to propose changes to the page to reflect accurate information regarding the current incarnation of the company (now named GM Defense LLC) which was reformed in 2017 and also help address the flags on the page regarding verification and notability. Thanks for your consideration. Jon Gray (talk) 23:44, 14 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Reply 14-FEB-2020

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🔼  Consensus requested  

  • It's not Wikipedia's practice to place references in the lead section without consensus, per MOS:CITELEAD. Please establish a consensus for this change before requesting it to be added to the article.[1]

Regards,  Spintendo  00:57, 15 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I consent 64.147.17.234 (talk) 17:31, 12 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ "Template:Request edit instructions". Wikipedia. 15 December 2019. Instructions for Reviewers: Do not insert major re-writes or controversial requests without clear consensus. When these are requested, ask the submitter to discuss the edits instead with regular contributors on the article's talk page. You can use {{edit COI|D|D}}.

RfC about inclusion of a citation in lead of edit request and other GM Defense re-writes

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Should the revised lead in an edit request be allowed to include a citation? We are seeking consensus on proposed re-writes as well. Jon Gray (talk) 18:27, 3 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

NOTE: I am submitting this Request for Comment for FleishmanHillard on behalf of GM Defense LLC. I am a paid editor and aware of the COI guidelines.

I am opening this RfC in response to COI editor Spintendo’s initial feedback to our edit request on the GM Defense page (submitted on Feb. 14, 2020). Our goal with this edit request is to update the page with accurate information regarding the current incarnation of the company (now named GM Defense LLC) and also help address the flags on the page regarding verification, etc.

Because our revised copy incorporated a citation in the lead to verify the claim – which as Spintendo pointed out, does not follow MOS:CITELEAD – we were asked to gain consensus on that suggested change first before proceeding with a specific edit request. Furthermore, with significant re-writes requested for the page, the reference box above that he cited also suggests that these should be reviwed by regular contributors for consensus as well.

For reference, below is the proposed lead that would replace the existing lead on the page:


GM Defense LLC is a wholly-owned subsidiary of General Motors established in October 2017 focused on reimagining advanced automotive technologies for the defense, aerospace and security markets.[1]


The full text of our edit request is below as well. We look forward to the community’s thoughts and are hopeful to gain consensus on how to proceed with the lead and proposed re-writes. Thank you for your time and consideration! Jon Gray (talk) 18:27, 3 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Photo Change Request

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NOTE: I’m proposing the following photo change request for FleishmanHillard on behalf of GM Defense. I am a paid editor and aware of the COI guidelines.

Photo Change Request - Infobox

  • The company logo currently used in the article’s infobox has since been replaced by a new version. I recently submitted the new logo to Wikimedia Commons on GM Defense’s behalf. We are hoping to have the logo that’s currently used in this article’s infobox exchanged for the correct version:

https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:GM_Defense_Updated_Wordmark_Blue_Horizontal_RGB.png

Per the guidelines, I know editors with a COI may add/update article photos, which I’m happy to do, but first wanted to confirm I am clear to do so, or turn this over to another editor to handle. Please let me know how I should proceed. Thanks for your time and consideration. Jon Gray (talk) 18:41, 25 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Go ahead: I have reviewed these proposed changes and suggest that you go ahead and make the proposed changes to the page. Happy Editing--IAmChaos 06:32, 26 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Oops I forgot that using the script does't ping @Jon Gray: Happy Editing--IAmChaos 06:33, 26 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@IAmChaos: Thank you! Will do. Jon Gray (talk) 14:55, 28 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]